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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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clouded patterns shadows sleep languishing in long stretches of darkness under grey blankets while emissions are tiredly sprayed from a solitary candle who slips on the footsteps of death into a flickering flame dressed in a worn-out attire of wax that has collapsed into a puddle on its stand in furtive quietness the candle takes leave as night descends flaunting complete control and takes guard to watch over the land ~°~°~°~ the day launched itself with reluctant smiles of sunbeams entering with whispering knocks on ash-grey doors feeling uninvited as the rain came down spilling out like tears out of a young girl’s eyes who has had her doll pulled out of her hand ~°~°~°~ why does it rain particularly when all we need is a spot of light why does memory haunt especially when all has been said and done with why does the cleanest of floors show a few specks of dust why does the widest of doors have an iron safety lock ~°~°~°~ perchance, the link is rust left behind by the taint of living in the ancient |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
why does the cleanest of floors show a few specks of dust ~*~ it's nice to see the feminine side of this... ~*~ the day launched itself with reluctant smiles of sunbeams entering with whispering knocks on ash-grey doors feeling uninvited ~*~ I know this feeling... ~*~ why does memory haunt especially when all has been said and done with ~*~ my friend calls these "tapes" that are on automatic self-wind... no way to destroy them, no way to tangle them... seemingly, no way of erasure... I liked this read, Sudhir...so many levels, so many places to be pulled, like warm taffy... Thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Sudhir! One that I am keeping to come back to later to read and read again. Thank you for this treasure. ~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sudhir: why does the widest of doors have an iron safety lock The eternal question - my friend amzaing write xxoo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Karilea, my good friend, thanks a lot for your wonderful response... you are way too kind...  Nancy, I thank you for your lovely words of appreciation... Sue, thank you lots... Regards to all, Sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the day launched itself with reluctant smiles of sunbeams entering with whispering knocks on ash-grey doors feeling uninvited as the rain came down spilling out like tears out of a young girl’s eyes who has had her doll pulled out of her hand ~°~°~°~ why does it rain particularly when all we need is a spot of light why does memory haunt especially when all has been said and done with =========================== you know what the moth always says ... why ask why  wonderful write of imagery and wisdom poet Sud..very cool lines and analogies. well done poet sir You're the best I've ever felt ... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I have to say, that I've enjoyed your relaxed and fluid style of writing. Not to mention the always fine imagery. Very nice. Ed |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks so very much Janet, my brilliant friend... Ed, I thank you for coming by and leaving behind such a nice response... regards, sudhir |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Suddy - email me on this one ok? Remind me that I want to talk to you about it...otherwise I'll forget lol...  K[This message has been edited by Severn (04-24-2003 05:30 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I honestly don't know, though I can only imagine He has to cry so much to see the children lying alone for a prayer! (sad sigh) I recognize these kind of tapestries, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery. ***Shakira***  [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-25-2003 03:57 PM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Kamla and Noah... Thanks a lot... regards, sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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