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time2shine
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since 2003-04-20
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0 posted 2003-04-25 07:25 PM





my spirit loves
my body does not
my spirit knows God
my body drowns in sin
my spirit lives forever
my body grows old
my spirit is pure
my body is not
I'm torn

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Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2003-04-25 07:28 PM


BRAVO!!!! Well said...aren't we all just humans doing the best we can....Welcome to PIP....

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
2 posted 2003-04-25 07:33 PM


oh very good !!!!! i like this one a lot.

thanks for sharing.

hugs x  june x

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-05-01 11:43 AM


The conflicts and temptations of being human....
We're quite a piece of work aren't we???
And I believe we truly are torn!!!!
Perfect title for this piece....
Enjoyed!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-05-25 03:31 AM


yes
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