Open Poetry #26 |
The Place Where Feelings Grow |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The Place Where Feelings Grow She ask me to express my feelings. How far did I wish to go? I told her I wanted to keep going until I found the place where feelings grow. I wanted to know her well enough to get past my fears. And I wanted to feel her love softy washing away my tears. JamesLee April 20 2003 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
not a hard place to find James, not for someone as feeling as you |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
James, This one got me! "I told her I wanted to keep on going until I found the place where feelings grow." In this often superficial world, it seems people are unwilling to get to that place. Sadly, one or the other gives up the search before the place is found. I love your writings. I know I have said this before but you give me so much insight. -Patricia |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful with plenty of FEELING. I also appreciate Patricia's words, she is so right. There seems to be so much fear to show feelings. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
James... this is one of your best yet... when you reach within, and apply this delicate touch, you strum heartstrings... |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
What an answer! very smooth friend kev |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Terrific!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James - this is lovely wishing she did indeed was away those tears xxoo |
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