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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-06-11 05:28 AM



Still Longing The Words

I cannot find those words
Once softly spoken
How does one write
When my heart is broken

There becomes that void
Heart feeling empty
Recalling times past
Then writing from memory

The many sleepless nights
Writing then deleting  
Heart echoes despair
Sadness keeps repeating

No ending as been written
Through silence I cry
For I can never let go
I am hopeless at goodbye

My broken heart still hangs
Endlessly I shall yearn
Still longing the words
Forever hoping your return

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2003-06-11 07:00 AM


so sad the sound of goodbye,even worse is when you were never told.......good stuff,hope
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-06-11 03:56 PM


Nice expression...James
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
3 posted 2003-06-11 04:09 PM


very nice write/read...

QjQ

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
4 posted 2003-06-11 07:25 PM


this is so sad and beautiful. i enjoyed reading it and it flows  really smoothly

hugs from june xxxxxx

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2003-06-11 08:25 PM


always a  beautiful heart write
hugss
M

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2003-06-12 12:24 PM


letting go...hard to do
Canon_D_111
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since 2003-06-04
Posts 58
New York USA
7 posted 2003-06-12 10:47 PM


my hardest decision was this...letting go...and the long nights of an empty bed...the warmth of her breath...the love we shared...but this was the correct one for me...

great emotion

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