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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-06-12 12:01 PM



Head on your breast the
rise and fall of your breathing
lulls me to sleep. Love

© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-06-12 12:06 PM


God that is beautiful . . . .
Temptress
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2 posted 2003-06-12 01:08 AM


Yep..

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Temptress
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3 posted 2003-06-12 01:08 AM


beautifully sweet..

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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4 posted 2003-06-12 07:01 AM


ssshhhhhhhhh...............
lights out........do not disturb.......
sweet, rafi, sweet

gemjop
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5 posted 2003-06-12 08:48 AM


oh raphael...just gorgeous.
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-06-12 12:21 PM


yes!
Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-06-12 09:19 PM


Thanks all..remembered, yes... felt any time lately..nyet
Canon_D_111
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8 posted 2003-06-12 10:22 PM


another cool one...like your work
Aenimal
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9 posted 2003-06-12 10:41 PM


thanks canon glad you do

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