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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-06-10 11:05 PM




A snap shot brings the warmest smile
in thoughts to visit and come back to.

Remembering the memories
oh the pleasure of your company.

While we sat upon the steps
wrapping arms across the miles.

We found a treasure without searching for
we came, we saw,with our own eyes.

A couple Jersey Girls in Ocean City
where time passed much too quickly.

From the porch of serendipity
we defined a truer meaning.

Of what a friend is really for
and the difference that a day makes.

Cooler by a mile all right
kept warm in friendship's heart.

~*~


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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-06-10 11:09 PM



From the porch of serendipity
we defined a truer meaning.


Such a cute place it was...

Of what a friend is really for
and the difference that a day makes.


That is the truth, meeting in real made for a much deeper friendship  


Cooler by a mile all right
kept warm in friendship's heart.


That was such a cute sign...and your words
make it even better...

and thanks
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-10-2003 11:10 PM).]

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2003-06-10 11:09 PM


BluesSerenade - you two! So great a photo, nice to see a smile on both of you. You two little devilishes you...

BC

skyshine
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3 posted 2003-06-10 11:10 PM


I'm glad to hear that you and your friend had a good time. Friendship warms us up, truly!

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

gyiel marlok
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4 posted 2003-06-10 11:12 PM


that is so sincere
garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-06-10 11:16 PM


Lori, that's two of the warmest and sweetest smiles. Just beautiful. Friendship is wonderful, isn't it?
Hugs to you both  
Ethel

QjQ
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6 posted 2003-06-10 11:18 PM


gee this ex jersey guy is packing and eastward bound   oh well a guy can dream?
nice pic/write/read jersey girl!!!!

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

Edder
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7 posted 2003-06-10 11:33 PM


well, thanks fer rubbin our noses in it!
Larry C
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8 posted 2003-06-10 11:41 PM


Well you don't let any grass grow under your feet! Cool!!! The lady know how to get things done...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Martie
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9 posted 2003-06-11 12:16 PM


Lori and Maureen...you are both adorable!  
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10 posted 2003-06-11 12:59 PM


What a pair....I'll be in Belmar in a month, but I bet I don't get that kind of welcome!

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Foxyoasis
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11 posted 2003-06-11 01:15 AM


hello from a fellow jersey native! good write very sweet!
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
12 posted 2003-06-11 01:59 AM


I say this all the time,  but I mean it!

Thank you for sharing my/our smiles,
and tripping down memories lane.

Many more hugs to you all~

passing shadows
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13 posted 2003-06-11 02:20 AM


beautiful! just darn beautiful!
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14 posted 2003-06-11 02:53 AM


This just warmed my heart to bits!  If I had one wish it would be to have a Serendipity Sojourn of Passions Poets smack dab in the middle of the U.S.A. and wouldn't that just be special?  Oh I loved the picture, the poem and the sentiment.
nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2003-06-11 08:23 PM


Thank you Martie. We had a great time and Ed, you should have showed up last week we would have given you a fine welcome! I hope you have the sun shining down on you.

M

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2003-06-12 06:32 AM


Nice writing...James
inkedgoddess
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17 posted 2003-06-12 07:00 AM


did you two get lucky in Atlantic City?......
love and peace,
a real jerseygirl........

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18 posted 2003-06-12 09:48 AM


(chuckling) I am not sure you two should be let out unsupervised again!

Nicely done Blues.... and it is obvious the both of you had an enjoyable time..

BluesSerenade
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19 posted 2003-06-12 07:30 PM


Thank you ever so much everyone.

You hear that M~, Cpat doesn't think we should be "let out unsupervised"....  And who pray tell should be our supervisor?   Huh, huh?   We are perfectly capable young ladies, not my fault they stuck a pole in the middle of the parking lot!  There was no harm done, I thought quick enough to destroy the evidence in a hurry.   So funny you are.

Thanks again all.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-12-2003 07:39 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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20 posted 2003-06-13 09:54 AM


Michele, we got lucky in that we sealed our friendship in real.

  And yes Lori, I always catch C's words, but I find myself wondering if anyone could really supervise the two of us together
hugss
M

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