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Fresh Cut Grass (inspired By SY)
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Fresh Cut Grass (inspired By SY) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Morning sun release me please Deny this state of reverie Oh, so sweet a calming shroud which keeps my fists from grinding down down down into the deep dark depths of me Green grass sweet retreat through my window peek I b-r-e-a-t-h-e you into me Inhale summer scent freedom from this dream state virtual debate of late Whispers in the morn' to remind me that You shall never leave my silent reprieve solemn prayer you stand beside me Release me please from this reverie Thanks SY /pip/Forum79/HTML/003427.html [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-10-2003 09:38 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
release seems to come from within...though we can find solace in the works of nature or art or other people... nicely written.. now go play barefoot... and laugh... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
littlewing....ahh, yes, the scent of fresh cut grass....you have given me summer smiles and childhood memories - thankyou. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write/read,,, oh how i remember the scent of fresh mowed grass.... Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Green grass sweet retreat through my window peek I b-r-e-a-t-h-e you into me Inhale summer scent freedom from this dream state virtual debate of late Whispers in the morn' to remind me that You shall never leave my silent reprieve solemn prayer you stand beside me amazing that just inhaling something so simple could save your soul, if but for a fleeting moment beautiful and green, and i am off work today and its sunny in the garden state,,,,,,,and i am off to jog and i will smile, smile, smile, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing The smell of new cut grass will do that.  And thank you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I love that scent of fresh mowed grass..... it smells kind of like watermelon....and I do love watermelon!! Hugs  Ethe; |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A beauty in idyll |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
'inhale summer scent freedom from this dream state virtual debate of late' great but unusual rhyming pattern. suz i like i very much. rose. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have such a unique style of writing that is full of poetic energy! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, this is beautifully relaxing, sweet friend, I love those April and May mornings so much and even in the evening you can taste the lemonade residue walking down the culdesacs! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
littlewing One of my favorite scents! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Awesome writing dawg..word |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ron: yes . . . indeed from within . . . what a nice wish for me . . .promise I will tomorrow TY YW Chris - God dont you just love that? Q: I know doesnt it just bring back good memories? TY Michele - it is always like that - sometimes the simplest things can give me pleasure . . .ummm . . . smile pretty now BIG SMILES thank you Hey SY - yes it will . . . yw for what? you are the one to thank Ethel: now you really have me thinking of summer with the watermelon TY Thanks Rose - as for my rhyming pattern - I make up my own - I follow no form - I just kind of make it flow - SuePoetry lol TY Linda - thank you - I didnt know I had a style . . . Noah yw - yesss summer is wayy too short . . . TY Martie - bottled on the store shelf? lol - "Scent of Grass" hehe mine too TY Ed - nice to see you here again yes a moment in time . . .TY YO Raph - tanks mon fa ra ra ra ra fa ra ra ra . . . you so crazeeeee . . . Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-10-2003 11:52 PM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Green grass sweet retreat through my window peek I b-r-e-a-t-h-e you into m I loved the way you prolonged the b-r-e-a-t-h-e for in the line I actually took a deep breath and thought for one second I could actually smell the green grass. There is nothing nicer than the smell of freshly cut grass. Thank you for the image, as it was excellent! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks guys . . . I know - that grass always makes me feel so good xxoo |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this is beautiful I think one of the nicest things of yours sweet |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Bri - you caught me at a weak moment lol xxoo |
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