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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Even though I may seem invisible, I am touched by the mist of thoughts that float towards me, gently lifting me for one more day. M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Invisible? hmmm... not quite, I still see the glimmer of your light though you try to hide it from time to time under a basket you turn upside down over it in hopes of keeping it safe. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maureen: me too - isnt it amazing how you just get up and go? I once asked a friend - what doe sit take to finally make you go: babble babble -padded room ready for the loony bin? I figure if I am not there yet -I am not suppossed to be - nor you great write - always are missed you xxoo |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrifically written,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, sometimes hanging by a thread, barely, but here |
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