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Thoughts While Driving
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Thoughts While Driving |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Soul exposed like a billboard on a highway Diamonds collecting dust beside a band of gold in my glovebox I gave you time I tried Goodbye [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-08-2003 04:02 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
i don't think you'd want to know my thoughts while driving...this one hurt Sue...I know how you feel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I gave you time. I tried. Goodbye." All I ask for is time... it never always works out...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Don't MAKE me press the gas? sigh. I don't even drive. gimme just a little break and stick around? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
cash it in or keep it? what do you think? those drivetimes will do it, i know, think, think, think... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Driving thoughts...Sometimes I am so deep in thought, it is a wonder I don't run more red lights than I do. Yikes.  Patricia |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You convey so much pain in so few words. Nice job, Sue. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is exquisite. I am keeping it! hugs to you littlewing. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
One can think and drive at the same time? I never knew that! Just kidding. Sad, Sue. Maybe the brakes are dragging a bit? |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Sometimes there is nothing left to do except saddle up and get out of Dodge by sunrise. Safe passage, godspeed. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dixie: I think I know your driving thoughts . . . TY I know James - time - contrary to the Stones - is NOT on my side thanks K - lol - clear the roads - the woman is behind the wheel!!! Hehe - I'm not going anywhere - from here I am not Thank you Karen Michele - I know I know . . . it is just too damn pretty to trade in . . . besides its mine lol thank you . . . Patricia - I know isnt that freaky? Sometimes I drive and think and wha-la am in my driveway . . . thank you Thanks Ken - hard for me to do that in so few words - I have a big mouth lol Hugs to you Chris - thanks I needed those Ice - you got it - got me a nice Chevy Tahoe breed too . . . thank you for your blessing Thanks guys xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Back up and hit him a few times grin |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Raph - I tried that once already . . . all it got me was a bill for new tires . . . grin |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Very pretty tweets, however sad it is. It's a long road to be left stranded on. Hugs, you~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sad write Sue..but I know this feeling.. and thinking and thinking... ~Hugs to you sweetie~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
My deaceased husband used to tell me to try to go to sleep and give my brain a rest. I wish that I could do that now where he's concerned (give my brain a rest, that is). Especially after I've found out some of the things he did. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... ahh if cars could speak and refer the thoughts that are thought within their space ... round and round they go ... the thoughts. Your few words are so powerful and say so much. Excellent job. Love, Margherita |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Sue, giving someone time, and receiving nothing back, grrrrrrrrr. knowing this, and actually living this at the mo. this kicks ass sue, always good to see u! lots of love, gemma xxxxx |
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[In]Visible Junior Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 11 |
Small but perfectly formed. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
look at this way,, goodbye past,,,hello future.. better roads lie ahead!!! Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bluesy - more like a long and winding road but yes . . . thank you Nancy - wish nobody knew this feeling but we all do - dont we? Stop thinking! lol TY Ahh Ethel: I do know how you feel - wish people would keep their mouths shut I know what I know and THAT - what goes around in my own head is bad enough Sleep peaceful please thank you Margherita - if cars could speak I would be in real trouble lol thank you - Hey gemma - miss you - havent been in here in awhile - and sorry your living this - wish it were over - trying to get on - you know? Bless you sincerely - be strong xxoo Invisible - very cool - its hard for me to write small . . . Ill have to go look for you - TY Q: I know - I know - its the in-between that stinks TY Thanks guys xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart sends heart hugs your way and I certainly hope you pit that vision in your rear view mirror and drive away quickly! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Yeah Sue, I think you know too  we're just like that I guess, and I thank you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah - thank you so much - is ok Dixie - yes sadly - the good ones always are ehehehehe thanks guys xxoo |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
'soul open like a billboard on a highway'. Very deep, you have to be able to trust a person completely, or it does not work for you. Maybe you need to begin to retreat within to repair your inner being, we first have to love ourselves before we can love others. great writing as usual suz. rose. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue- This one, as many of yours, cut straight to the bone and beyond. I have my own band of gold in the glove box. Another masterpiece. Day after day I'm more confused, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you seem to have nailed this one ina few words andimages... I agree with Ice.. sometimes there is nothing left to do... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Rose - you nailed it man . . . exactly what I need to do Ron - coming from you that means so so much - sadly yes I agree too thank you Brad - thank you - what to do with these bands we all possess hmmm? Thanks guys truly xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-10-2003 08:43 AM).] |
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