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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-06-09 07:09 AM

Close this war, i fight so weakly

feebly grounded by full force fist

named love.

Hold me tighter, til what i want to say

escapes like natural breath

and not before.

Gravelly grate my skin that cries

peel to release a new barb wire

survive this burning.

Dig up my voice from early grave

wash til it runs clear

and your selfishness is the sound.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (06-09-2003 07:11 AM).]

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

1 posted 2003-06-09 07:28 AM

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Hold me tighter, til what i want to say

escapes like natural breath

and not before.
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Very, very cool. Can't express that enough.

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unwindyormind
VIVA LA FUNK!!!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-06-09 08:16 AM

Hold me tighter, til what i want to say

escapes like natural breath

and not before.

Ouch!!! Gemma, this is so powereful!!
I like it.

Heart hugs to youi. little Lady :hugs

Ethel

Psssttt!!! It's good to see you here so early!! See you later!!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-06-09 08:23 AM

gemjop
Nicely done, enjoyed the read.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2003-06-09 10:33 AM

thanks for the kind words.

i'm down.

and confused and angry

not good eh?

much love, gem xxx

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-06-09 03:57 PM

Hey first round is on me as long as its not Guiness..eew

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-06-09 05:49 PM

Brilliant!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-06-09 07:31 PM

Damnn Gem - gravelly grate my skin . . .

I want to write like that . . .

this is (if I could swear I would)
amazing . . . as they all are

and umm Raph - what exactly is WRONG with guiness now? hmmm? Put a shot of Jamieson in it - drop it in the glass and chug - bittersweet
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-09-2003 07:32 PM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-06-10 08:58 AM

Close this war, i fight so weakly

feebly grounded by full force fist

named love.

it is like this, isnt it?

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

9 posted 2003-06-10 09:08 AM

very good write/read,,, enjoyed....

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

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