eat the sun....... help me finish

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Open Poetry #26

eat the sun....... help me finish

Chris-
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since 2003-06-09

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0 posted 2003-06-09 11:59 AM

yesterday i ate the sun
and wore the mountains of the East
I ran from wind and struck up war
just to stop the peace

*help me finish*
write the next stanza please!! i can't seem to get anything to go with this i've been trying four like 15 minutes now*

Sunshine

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1 posted 2003-06-09 12:07 PM

You're off to a good start. Give it 15 hours...and more will come.

Musn't rush perfection...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-06-09 12:30 PM

Just relax,
the words will come..
don't rush, it or force it.

You're off to a great start...

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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3 posted 2003-06-09 01:00 PM

hey, a great beginning! the rest will come sooner or later...it happens that way

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