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Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

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Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-06-08 07:42 PM

So loved he thought
The moon was surround
The thought flinched
The shadow cinched

So cooed the stone
So laughed the sand
He wondered and wandered
No one replied

Just why whistled through the tree
Just how on bended knee
So now they ran the path
Just when – not now

He wanted – the moon hid
Terror made a bid
No matter sighed time
It never will be mine

[This message has been edited by Goodknight (06-08-2003 08:01 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-06-08 09:05 PM

Wonderful write Paul..love the rhythm as I was reading this piece.
Something hauntingly sad about it...well done!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

2 posted 2003-06-08 09:18 PM

Paul...Much feeling in this and a bit of magic along with melancholy. Beautifully written! So glad to see you posting again, my friend!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-06-08 09:51 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I'd always expect the moon to glow with sincerity and enigma, dearest friend, a pretty good reason to hide herself away until some reason can be found to shine! (sad sigh) This is very heartwrenching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2003-06-08 10:01 PM

Seems we're both writing about moons tonight. And pondering in the woods is a favorite hobby. Moons and woods, I really enjoyed reading this
Liz

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5 posted 2003-06-09 12:42 PM

Hi, good to see you back here!

I like the ethereal quality of this, the questing atmosphere held from the first word to the last. Good spirit writing is definitely worth the wait.....

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2003-06-09 12:46 PM

Real life is filled with mixed emotions.
Loved the style and rhythm in this.

Nice, knight~ isn't it though!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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7 posted 2003-06-09 04:57 AM

wow, good write, a bit sad

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