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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-06-08 11:00 AM


When we first met
I wanted nothing
To do with you
To me at the time
Men were scum

I had just go through
A terrible break up
Whne you showed up on
The scene
I just felt like being mean

But when you said "Hello" so kindly
I couldn't say no to being just your friend
But I told you I would be nothing more
Than just your friend because of the
Horrible ordeal I just endured

I talked to you for 2 months
When I found out I really did like you
I didn't know how to say it
But I did know how to express it
In other ways

One day I just looked in your eyes
And at that time I knew I was in love
I couldn't hold back from kissing those
Lucious lips of yours anymore

Then after the kiss
When your eyes met mine
I knew this love I felt
Even though being stubborn in the beginning
Was truly meant to be

Cold hands means a warm heart

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1 posted 2003-06-08 11:05 AM


When we first met
I wanted nothing
To do with you
To me at the time
Men were scum

Hang onto that thought -- we are, you know!

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ThunderMage
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2 posted 2003-06-08 11:10 AM


Men are pigs, or so my Dad always says. LOL

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

bslicker
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3 posted 2003-06-08 11:19 AM


"One day I just looked in your eyes
And at that time I knew I was in love
I couldn't hold back from kissing those
Lucious lips of yours anymore

Then after the kiss
When your eyes met mine
I knew this love I felt
Even though being stubborn in the beginning
Was truly meant to be"


So there you have it...
Tells the story here
Enjoyed



ThunderMage
if men are pigs,, what are women?  LOL

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
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Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-06-09 11:53 AM


cool piece!
passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-06-09 01:04 PM


good expressions Julie
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