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all who speak, yet go unheard, READ THIS
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all who speak, yet go unheard, READ THIS |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 
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A photograph edges worn a smile smearing through tomorrow and today edge of hair caught by wind head tilted slightly toward the ground my left hand placed so very carefully in front of my forlorn face the camera dropped slowly, slightly 'HA' yeah... I laughed! What are you gonna do about it?! You wanna know why I did? I'll tell you! I laughed, yeah, laughed, with my head thrown back all wild... shaking side to side, my throat offered up to the sky mouth all kinds of wide to warn away all persons not shaking so, I rose my hand to anyone, anyone in front of me, because everyone, not just anyone stared with those same dead eyes, as if, whoever strayed behind me wrote all answers black and white between straps of shirt on their bare chest truth strung between suspenders so I just imagined I was that motionless pictograph that wasn't really motionless at all really, I was a frozen notion wading heavily through hot pools of truth to finally weep and rest upon the shore of all the ears of the world, strung and knotted together, though, deaf as they were... ~*This was tapped out after reading so many great poems here at Passions. So really I owe thanks to all who ever posted here... Thank you, thank you very, very much.*~ www.heybroproductions.com unwindyormind VIVA LA FUNK!!! [This message has been edited by AniKay83 (06-09-2003 11:48 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."I was a frozen notion"---one of several memorable lines! Warm hugs, EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"frozen notion" cool imagery here glad to see you've thawed and are posting again   |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
really, I was a frozen notion wading heavily through hot pools of truth to finally weep and rest upon the shore of all the ears of the world, strung and knotted together, though, deaf as they were... ~*~ This won't go unheard... these are great lines, Christine...how often I have felt just this...only to find the feelings so well displayed here... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-09-2003 11:27 AM).] |
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Chris- Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 52 |
very nice imagery i like the frozen notion part but i think the warm pools of truth really finish out that line, very good thanks for sharing |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
cool piece |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write, several favorite lines in it |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is wonderful and I am keeping it!! In my library of course. lol. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are very special to us all and I am so happy you're back and writing wonderful poetry again! (sigh) This is a very poignant illustration, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Christine, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Whhoooo!!! I made it in Nightshade's library! I'm proud of that considering your work... Thanks everyone for the beautiful replies. I think it helps fuel me greatly as a poet to have so much encouragement.  www.heybroproductions.com |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
You list yourself as missong since 1999, however, with poems like this, you are going to have the world beating the bushes trying to find you. This is truly an outstanding job. Day after day I'm more confused, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This ROCKS! excellent imagery. Absolutely love it! adding to my library. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
AniKay83 A good strong write. enjoyed |
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