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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I slept well last night even with the soft sound of tv voices. I drifted off to before places and yesterday moments when I felt the closeness of you. Sometimes words replayed themselves in small vignettes, and I could see behind the blue of eyes, a depth that exposed itself when you couldn't contain it any longer. Somehow and for whatever reason, I am missing those moments where I felt contentment in your arms and warmth from lips that could hold my attention forever. There is nothing new in my words, nothing notable to be critiqued, just an honesty held for you to see. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to be held...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sometimes memories are comforting and bring back sweet moments without pain .... you slept well! Very melancholic, but so well written. Love, Margherita |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely written,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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SuperDave Junior Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 48Little House on the Hill |
I like this M and nothing to critique. David |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
honest and sweet |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautifully you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you James, I always have that need to be held, usually though my own arms will have to do  Margherita, I am sleeping alot better lately...Thank you hugs M Thank you Q David, good to see you. Maybe someday you will join us in posting a poem? Thank you hugss M gyiel, yes that's me, honest to a fault.  Dixie, once again my sincere thanks hugs M |
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