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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-06-08 03:45 PM

I slept well last night
even with the soft sound of tv voices.
I drifted off to before places and
yesterday moments when
I felt the closeness of you.

Sometimes words replayed themselves
in small vignettes, and I could see
behind the blue of eyes, a depth
that exposed itself when you
couldn't contain it any longer.

Somehow and for whatever reason,
I am missing those moments
where I felt contentment in your arms
and warmth from lips
that could hold my attention forever.

There is nothing new in my words,
nothing notable to be critiqued,
just an honesty held for you to see.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-06-08 03:49 PM

Nice to be held...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-06-08 04:30 PM

Sometimes memories are comforting and bring back sweet moments without pain .... you slept well!
Very melancholic, but so well written.
Love, Margherita

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-06-08 04:53 PM

nicely written,,

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

SuperDave
Junior Member

since 2002-09-12

Posts 48
Little House on the Hill

4 posted 2003-06-08 11:16 PM

I like this M and nothing to critique.

David

gyiel marlok
Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 145
OHIO

5 posted 2003-06-08 11:19 PM

honest and sweet

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-06-09 05:13 AM

just beautifully you

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-06-10 08:36 AM

Thank you James, I always have that need to be held, usually though my own arms will have to do

Margherita, I am sleeping alot better lately...Thank you

hugs
M

Thank you Q

David, good to see you. Maybe someday you will join us in posting a poem? Thank you
hugss
M

gyiel, yes that's me, honest to a fault.

Dixie, once again my sincere thanks
hugs
M

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