Open Poetry #26 |
A Field of Green |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A Field of Green I walked into a field of green Where not a footstep could be seen Where winds were right and passed you light And sunshine was the lord of sight It is a field of weightless thought Where butterflies of mind are wrought Where flowers sprinkle rainbow hews And mirror in a sky of blues It is a place of meditate A place of mind a place of state The echo of a flying dove The reaching of a velvet glove It is an imply out of hand It is a lullaby of sand It is a fleeting path of goal It is our Shangri-la of soul There is no charge to grab its ring It is a haven that we cling. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
It is a field of weightless thought Where butterflies of mind are wrought Where flowers sprinkle rainbow hews And mirror in a sky of blues Oooooh, yes. ~smiles~ this provoked my own little memory. can i keep this one? i am i am! A lovely vision to wake up and read there seymour, thanks! much love, gem xxxxx |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Seymour.... This is so peaceful feeling..... It is a place of meditate A place of mind a place of state The echo of a flying dove The reaching of a velvet glove ....and beautiful. Thanks for this on this fine Monday morning..... Have a good day, Hugs to you Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-09-2003 08:08 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop Thank you for entering my field of green and of course you my keep it. Hugs back |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel May it brighten your monday morning, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It is a field of weightless thought Where butterflies of mind are wrought Where flowers sprinkle rainbow hews And mirror in a sky of blues ============================ What a beautiful verse of imagery and spirit. (check your email...we are on the same wave length) *ww* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I noticed, just openned your mail and saw the gorgious butterflies. Thank you for sendig them. And would that be your shoulder they are sitting on? WWRS |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"It is an imply out of hand It is a lullaby of sand It is a fleeting path of goal It is our Shangri-la of soul There is no charge to grab its ring It is a haven that we cling." Ahh such a beautiful meditative place.. the greenfields of our minds we sometimes go. Reminded me of that song..from many years ago.. "Greenfields" one of my favourites... Just as this is now a favourite one of yours for me. ~Morning Hugs & Tea, Nancy Lee~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you and I'll be right there. :kiss; |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! ---and after reading this graceful poem of spirit, it is most definitely a "Good morning" for me! Someday may we walk that field of green together in companionable silence... EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good morning Sy! I've got a whole lot of catching up to do, and my muse is nowhere to be seen! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel I'd love to walk a field of green with an angel. Sunshine, Good morning love, there will be time. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour, this is beautiful and going into my library! This field sounds like the perfect place to have our tea and crumpets! I'll grab the picnic basket and meet you where the daisies grow! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You're on! Meet me at next twi-thought-of-light... I must save this to my treasure trove of special treasures now......., lest I forget--again! Have a glorious day, my friend! Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, I'll meet you where the daisies grow, Linda, I'll meet you in my next twilight thought. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow....awesome write Seymour |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
AH! Thanks for share your Happy Place. Melton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thanks for the WOW. Melton, Thanks for the reply. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymnour, this is beautiful, sweet friend, so let's set up a May pole out there and make a field day! (big hugggsssssss) I love this, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
I can see the field you were in. i have visted just such fields in england. flowing, good timing and great imagery and most important it RHYMES. poetry must rhyme that is the discipline , to find words that rhyme and you have here seymour. thank you. rose. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Good idea thank you Noah. Goldenrose Thank you for the read and comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Just a visit brings a smile... *S* This is beautiful, Seymour. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern You are a love. |
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