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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
She in creep slow this morning Across slick skies Slid her warm hands across Prairie thighs To stroke grass now in tall wave On bended stem As it found the morning breeze Enticing enough to sway in dance of subtle erotic Blend between summer gold And the still green of spring. She stared into my eyes As I drove east Leaving me to wonder at the Blinding red haze When I looked away That led me to believe And in wonder know How it was When I looked At you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I got a sunburn just reading your radiant poem!  Mornin' hugs, EA |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow....  so wonderful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...damn. This is beautiful Captain.. Thank you for starting my day..my week..this summer off with a smile. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She does, sometimes, creep in just like that... Excellent...just what is needed to welcome in the morning summer... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooh, this is a keeper !! Thankyou for sharing these summertime words with us Cpat. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sunblinded and sunstruck as well I see |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She in creep slow this morning Across slick skies Slid her warm hands across Prairie thighs To stroke grass now in tall wave On bended stem As it found the morning breeze Enticing enough to sway in dance of subtle erotic Blend between summer gold And the still green of spring. ============================== my oh my ... you just wrote the sky in sigh. Stunning write Capt..perfect ending (as always) Im still imagining your voice ... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron....This reads so beautiful! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Everything they said...this is awesome. Jason |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the way you write! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ron - this is beautiful . . . I saw this first as a woman passionate and erotic then as the Sun spreading across the prairies . . . A gift this is thank you stunning imagery and duality xxoo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes, that's it exactly....I've been blinded a time or two.... But at least you have the solace of having been blinded by the morning sun.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
this is slick kid |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I felt the sunbeam drowning upon me reading this and left some kind of pallor on my shoulders! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is scintillating, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
She in creep slow this morning Across slick skies Slid her warm hands across Prairie thighs To stroke grass now in tall wave On bended stem As it found the morning breeze Enticing enough to sway in dance of subtle erotic Blend between summer gold And the still green of spring. Capt. Ron, your description of the sun stroking the thighs of the prairie is as sensual as if you were writing about a woamn you are in love with.....I loved it, Capt. Hugs  Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think the air conditioner in this office just quit. *G* Saying I like isn't nearly enough... but oh, do I ever! *S* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ron, Very, very intense. Excellent play on words. Susan |
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