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Waking with you
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Waking with you |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Waking with you Tresses Sunlight dappling Rhythm of early sleep Finger tracing your supine shape Radiance glowing from smoldering eyes Arms reaching to pull me closer Cascading locks on chest Forms entwining Tresses |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a beautiful rictameter Ken! Lovely images come to mind when I read this. Very much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This was so beautiful. I pictured it all.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I pictured it as me and Julie.  What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautiful! what a nice way to wake up |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I had forgotten there were mornings like that. Thank you. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
To E and Loner, your words are kind And Thunder and 'sun, you make me shine Whenever my words your spirits lift To Icebox too, your praise is a gift Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ken,  This is a beautiful rictameter. I'm so glad that I saw it before it got pushed to the other pages. I would have hated to have missed this poem of my favaorite form of poetry!! You did it so beautifully, too!!  Man, we are busy on this Open Forum. I posted a poem early this morning and it's already moved to page three, I think it is, with one reply. Gooodness, where's everybody coming from? LOL Hugs to you, friend  Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The sunlight dappling really sets the mood. Subtle romance at it's very best!!! This was just grand kayjay!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ken, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I think each morning we just have to wake to the sun and what better way than share it with someone special? (big hugggsssssss) This is enlightening, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
kayjay....Very lovely! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lucky is she who wakes with you!  Exceptionally lovely rictameter! (I've also forgotten to click on the centering button before! ) Warm hugs, EA |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
liked... nicely done and it captured something I had not thoughtof in a while...so thanks for reminding me.. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ken: I love this - reminds me of that early morning hush at the new sunrise . . . beautiful - just beautiful images xxoo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a way to wake. *S* This is beautiful! *S* |
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