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Letting go......
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Letting go...... |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
A year and two months gone, The heart still beats as strong. Over oceans and tempestuous time, Your Love's harbour is still safe in mine. Always yearning to hold you close, Always longing to see you smile, And catch the twinkle in your eyes, Oh, what wondrous joy. The future seemed like ours, To conquer, to triumph over. A world so beautiful, Just waiting for us to discover. But clouded now is the path...... Will we survive Fate's wrath? Is Forever still ours? Will it be so? For I do understand now, That in truly loving someone Is knowing when to let go. [This message has been edited by Verve (06-09-2003 04:13 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You know, as much as I'd love to batter you.. I really actually felt for this poem. It's sad, a verily sad poem..but I really liked it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...sad but true |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
And loving ourselves enough too! Prolonging the pain is a futile attempt at living. Enjoyed this verve, I also like the honesty in your critique message. Really nice~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts...James |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Regina- knowing when to let go is one of the hardest decisions to make. Great job. Day after day I'm more confused, |
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