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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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"There is no such thing as love." White words on the black of slate. "There is nothing up above but element and birdy waste." "There is nothing you can do." so I parsed the sentence sane. "There is nothing down below but backs of those you've loved and slain." "All your tears are saline drip." A chemist dreams of just a drop. "Oh, I want no part of this..." but would not ask for him to stop. something rages in my skin the "I" within the midst of sin something quietly forgives and not once did he ask my name... I felt it and I failed the class. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
he suxed as a teacher anyway |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
He wasn't great in bed either!   |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like I said...the difference between ooooo and aaahhhh... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Like I need help, being naughty? mmmmmmmooooooooooo....ahhhhhhh. I always did think those two belonged together!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Youch. Y'know, I've heard  that you writestuff just like this... when y'gonna teach me? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, How about an A for trying, |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Eloquently expressed pain. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Now, this is the Serenity I remember.... Well written Ser. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Life has a HUGGGGGGGE curve in grading anyhow K - if that were the matter well we would all be in dentention - wait - ummm . . . we are - anyhow . . .(backing out slowly) this is a good one - think Ill print it out and take it with me - if ya dont mind xxoo lol@lady . . . |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
'something rages in my skin the "I" within the midst of sin something quietly forgives...' Yes, it does doesn't it! I like your muscles when you flex them. *smile* |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
and no good in bed? curb time lol |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
in raised fist shouting 'power to the students' LOL, yes, you are naughty naughty naughty! and we are the lucky ones who see the real 'I' of you |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Those are the teachers you most remember...the ones you don't learn from...keep on not learning like this girlchild |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
give your self a break, baby this is a vast gray plain you ride it WILL be boring but on the other side is oasis a "working -out" poem at its keenest |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Who needs such education anyway? *S* Excellent write, serenity... too bad so many stay for the full course. *S* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"something rages in my skin the "I" within the midst of sin something quietly forgives" These lines are amazing. Susan |
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