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Open Poetry #26

Of Consequence

LastMoments
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since 2003-03-07

Posts 92

0 posted 2003-06-08 07:57 PM

I left myself behind
To see my nothing
To fall to the ashes
Of what I had become
You took me
And walked the hidden road
To find my insides
To find what didn't matter

I grasped the icy heart
That froze me in my place
And shattered like glass
That stuck into my face
Rip apart my structure
Make me what I can't be
Imagine what you've done
To make me so ugly inside

So take my eyes
Carve the ways inside of them
You make me hate what i see
You make me go away
I can't adapt to this
I can't see where I stand
No wonder I keep falling
No wonder I can't get out of this

Inside I burn with envy
But I still hate you to the core
The beating heart of misery
That lifts itself inside my head
Correcting all i once pretend
I now see you for what you are
I now wish you would become
My nothing, my last request
Of consequence

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-08 08:03 PM

This poem rules, but I can't tell if it's angry or sad..perhaps a little of both?

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