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majnu
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0 posted 2003-06-08 07:25 PM



I burned the last three poems I wrote;
It was strange to watch the paper curld and be gone - consumed by something without life, but with appetite.
It was my hand writing, my words, good think I copied them first.
I am glad it was three poems. Three is a good number - 3 pigs, 3 sisters, 3 brothers, trilogies, begining, middle, end, GOD, Generator, Overseer, Destroyer.
Always three - Abraham, Ishmael, Issaac; father, son, holy ghost; Ali, Hassan, Hussein. Hills, mountains, breasts; all three points in two dimensions - parabolic fits!
3, 9, 27, 81, 243, 729 ...
ugly, yet elegant -
beautiful, yet base -
three has a middle ground which defies the dichotomy of our lives.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.


[This message has been edited by majnu (06-09-2003 01:22 AM).]

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2003-06-08 07:38 PM


Feeling safe in the middle?
LOL, enjoyed this perspective, majnu.

I was a middle child, though there were more than three. Actually? there WERE three...on each side of me! go figure that one.


majnu
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2 posted 2003-06-08 07:45 PM


glad you liked it midnite, but i am not in the middle. i am eldest

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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