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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2003-06-08 03:07 PM

Barefoot
Freedom hits me
with unknown power
while I run barefoot
in the white sand
on a golden shore,
imprinting tracks of joy
for just a fleeting moment.
With a passionate caress
the rhythmic waves
read the secret signs
and store them safely
in the depth of time.
The sun blissfully plays
with the drops of water
splashed into my face
each drop a kiss from You.
Distance doesn’t hurt
I feel the whole world
sings to me of You.
You told the water
to softly kiss my skin,
you told the sun
to rock me on her rays,
you told the sand grains
to caress my bare feet,
you told the breeze
to carry your scent to me.
Love has found its way
into my yearning heart.
We perform life’s dance
in sweetest harmony
dwelling in each other
and in all the elements.
Margherita

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-08 03:12 PM

oh my~~ this is just terrific with the pic and words so nice,, i felt like i was there..

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-06-08 04:02 PM

I agree with Glenn....totally. Your visual
graphics blended well with the exceptional
writing. Nice Poem..

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2003-06-08 04:04 PM

You brought back, vividly, wonderful memories of hours spend walking along the sandy shore of the Atlantic coast...How I miss the feel, smell and taste of those sunfilled beaches....Magnificent writing...

[This message has been edited by Startime55 (06-08-2003 04:05 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-06-08 04:13 PM

Ah barefoot on the mediterranean shore..sigh miss that. Ma io non lo so come si po giocare calcio supra la spiaga sensi scarpe!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-06-08 04:18 PM

Margherita - a most lovely writing. Sand between ones toes on the beach, just beautifully written...

BC

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2003-06-08 05:02 PM

Pretty.

Great poem. It all works perfectly together.

Thank you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-06-08 05:04 PM

Very very nice..made me want to kick my shoes off and head for the beach.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-06-08 05:33 PM

(smiles) Oh Margherita, I just love this, sweet friend, I want to move to the beach soooooo much so I can play in the sand and embrace each sunny day with relaxation and fun! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, guess the mountains will have to do for now, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-06-08 05:54 PM

barefoot goes nice with red toenails
love this feeling

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

10 posted 2003-06-08 05:58 PM

You describe barefoot and love so well. I loved the picture as it was just perfect for your words.

How I long to be at the beach ... if it would just stop raining and warm up here.

Hugs, Marti

MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

11 posted 2003-06-08 06:10 PM

Margherita,
Oh this is so, so beautiful. How is it you can see the world this way? I yearn to so badly, but I never can...

Mike

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2003-06-08 06:14 PM

Wow...this is silky smooth....two thumbs up and five stars and a hug and a kiss...James

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

13 posted 2003-06-08 06:44 PM

The ocean makes for such beautiful metaphor.. I love it, a lot.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

14 posted 2003-06-08 06:54 PM

YES! this is absolutely beautiful imagery, and that picture? I want to run on that beach.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

15 posted 2003-06-08 08:51 PM

Margherita:

I dont know if you were speaking of someone special but this sure spoke to me
It reminds me of all the gifts we are bestowed upon us without even realizing it
Made me feel grateful for the rain today you did
Thank you
and what a dream that would be to be on that beach . . .
I miss it
xxoo

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

16 posted 2003-06-09 07:17 PM

So very beautiful Margherita.
Love,
Eric

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

17 posted 2003-06-09 07:33 PM

The sun blissfully plays
with the drops of water
splashed into my face
each drop a kiss from You.

~*~

From this point forward...it only gets better.

Hugs...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

18 posted 2003-06-10 07:51 AM

Thank you my friends for reading and "leaving your foot- and heartprints" together with mine on the white sand on that beautiful beach ... it is a great vision of peace and joy to imagine all of us there breathing deeply, enjoying the sun, life, friendship ..... and creativity!
Much love, Margherita

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

19 posted 2004-03-16 09:29 AM

the absolute freedom in this, bliss

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