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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2003-05-06 08:54 PM


would you work as a ranger
in my forest
would you control the animals of me
when they run wild
there....at the sides of your smile

where tan and laughing eyes dance
would you tell me stories about your fish
under the sea
when it is nude on horizon
and wears only the suntan skins

would you fold your thumb under fingers
and pretend to be shy
in pink or pale
with your toes painted pretty
and your lips wet with words

and would I beg you to say them
loud softly from the inside
of your soul song drums
the ones you play when sleeping
or pretending to sleep

just before some tomorrow morning cries?


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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-05-06 08:58 PM




(sigh) I truly believe your special someone would do such things and fulfill your requirements, as I wish for your estuary to always be inundating with sparrows and flamingoes to color your hearts world! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, it is wonderful to see you here again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-05-06 09:00 PM


Is it you?     Welcome home.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-06-2003 09:01 PM).]

Martie
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3 posted 2003-05-06 09:00 PM


Hey DS...So good to see you!...always your words are so visually sensory and provocative..and enjoyed!  Hugs!
Dark Stranger
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West Coast
4 posted 2003-05-06 09:18 PM


Noah.........howdy amigo.......the gypsy of me is on the keys for a moment....thanks for the eyes my friend.


Sunshine......you are the tan sin of memory, I enjoy the burn of your smile......you melt the ice that I sipped from some yesterday til now........thanks babe


Ms Martie.....park by the side of some sigh place and let the boys play in their swings, wave at me with flowers in handfuls......my armor is dull without your smile......thank you for dancing by

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-05-06 09:34 PM


DS!!  You have no idea
how much your words have been missed...
Please stay awhile?
Play awhile?
~Hugs & Teasing Smiles~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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6 posted 2003-05-06 09:36 PM


where tan and laughing eyes dance
would you tell me stories about your fish
under the sea
when it is nude on horizon
and wears only the suntan skins
=======================

YER SO KEWL

stick around so us moths may tan in your pretty blue flame

You're the best I've ever felt ...
it's so wrong not to be with you.
It's getting harder to stay away,
it stops my heart just to be with you.

SH

Dark Stranger
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Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2003-05-06 10:11 PM


'chantress......stay and play........sure for awhile if you will whisper sweet things
just for a moment of a thousand


Janet, sweet mothy ......you are wind in the leaves.....you make the sounds that night voices try to copy on their wings

wranx
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8 posted 2003-05-06 10:33 PM


Dark! You scooter trash! Good to see ya here....
And you brought a little something as well.


Poet deVine
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9 posted 2003-05-06 10:51 PM


Hey!! It's good to read you again!! This is pure YOU..soft with just an edge of naughty!
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
10 posted 2003-05-07 12:14 PM


Well lookie here, where you been all my life?
Sounds like you've found yourself a coppertone baby, but you aint seen nothing yet!  My tan is better than her tan....neener, neener, neener.     


So nice to read your dark and sultry stuff again DS~

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
11 posted 2003-05-07 12:30 PM


lips wet with words , sliding my tongue
D.S your words sing like a soul song

Missed you , welcome back
Hope

Severn
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12 posted 2003-05-07 03:02 AM


Well...you've lived up to your name for awhile it seems...

Nice to read your work again DS

K

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13 posted 2003-05-07 07:26 AM


DS... good to see you back...

I enjoyed reading your unique style again.


Charisma
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lost in blue pages
14 posted 2003-05-07 08:18 AM


Always a pleasure to read you.



Charisma

passing shadows
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displaced
15 posted 2004-04-04 08:34 PM


mmmmmmmmm....
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