Open Poetry #26 |
Grog and Gruel |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
To sail the seas of raging foam, to walk the wooden rail. To follow true the northern star as winds the rigging wail. The smell of pitch and sticky sap, of pots with boiling stew. Of Yo Heave Ho and bottled ale, a sailor’s portly due. The watch in wait the tower high to sight the blowing whale. A pound in hand the vaulted prize to men who man the sail. A biscuit hard to sop the meal into a gaping maw. A tale of yore, of dainty maids who thwart the aching paw. A thousand leagues, or fathom less beneath the wooden hull. A watchful mate who sights the mark upon the count and pull. Tis but the life of wayward scruffs who skim the blue regale. Their hearts were born to man the jib and raise a salty tale. And when the sail is seen the edge of light beyond the moon. A bet is sure, to wager well... ...his heart will come home soon... [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-08-2003 05:35 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Barry, you are so good at this! I love your sea tales. Especially those whale sea tails. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Wonderful storytelling |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Barry, this is a remarkable tale. Such a wonderful talent you have. Gotta love the old heave ho, and how your words tug at my heart! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! wonderful ending! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific,,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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