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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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I know you're there in still life standing close behind by me watching from the sidelines my eyes catching your reflection through tinted windows on a side street. Like the sun dares to stare me down from the outside looking in I want to stay right here beside you passing through my minds eye so I can always keep you near. Holding up the prisms light turned in your direction I've drawn you in a thousand seascapes outlined in silver shadows defined in silhouette. Leaning in to shape your profile focused on your nonchalance brushing up against the curves rigid in straight lines highlighting your perfections ~Poised against the skyline~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-08-2003 10:59 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write,  Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
now if only I can find someone with those perfections to highight... nice visions, Lori hugs M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely beautiful Lori. I so very much enjoyed the read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
sun stares me down, and the prism,it's intelligent and savy.it's awesome,skyline and your cute too |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bluesy - you always sing to me but here you paint ans what an artist you are . . . This strangely enough reminds me of my step-dad - you know - like watching from above - smiling beautiful xxoo |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very good write.I will now entertain the idea that my lady sees me like this. Jason |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I can't thank you all enough for reading my attempts at poetry. I appreciate it so much. Thank you always~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just gorgeous! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
beautiful poetry - loved reading it - Paul |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Poised against the skyline"---a wonderful portrait you have painted! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, A write, like littlewing, to which I can relate. Nice. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (06-09-2003 09:20 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lori, this isn't just good....this is top shelf. attempt? I think not.... a success, yes! Enjoyed the view... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Like the sun dares to stare me down from the outside looking in I want to stay right here beside you passing through my minds eye so I can always keep you near. My gosh, I love this Bluesygirl. Can I keep it? I can?!! Thanks. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
you've done it again! it's a pleasure to read you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Lori, this is beautiful, sweet friend, how I'd love to hold my dream girl against a beautiful San Diego or Costa Rica skyline! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well gosh, I don't know what to say to you guys. I just hope I give back to you, as much as you give to me. And Barry, thanks for the top shelf stuff, it's nice to be placed so high. Thank you everyone, for everything! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Holding up the prisms light turned in your direction I've drawn you in a thousand seascapes outlined in silver shadows defined in silhouette. sounds like a dream, can it be real? beautiful words, missed telling you so [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-10-2003 08:36 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Holding up the prisms light turned in your direction I've drawn you in a thousand seascapes outlined in silver shadows defined in silhouette. Such softness... such tenderness... such beauty. *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely words, Lori, passionate and honest. Much enjoyed! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Like the sun dares to stare me down from the outside looking in I want to stay right here beside you passing through my minds eye so I can always keep you near. Yes!!!! And this...... Leaning in to shape your profile focused on your nonchalance brushing up against the curves rigid in straight lines highlighting your perfections ~Poised against the skyline~ Yep, Lori...you painted it just right. Hugs  Ethel |
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