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I'll Be There
| Open Poetry #26 |
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I'll Be There |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts 
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You can always call me Even if you hate me Even If I hate you Ill always be there You can always cry on my shoulder Even if you haven’t talked to me in years Even if I haven’t talked to you in years Ill always be there You can always talk to me Even if youtry to ignore me Even if I try to ignore you I’ll always be there You can alwayshurt me Even if you were nice to me the day before Even if I was nice to you the day before I’ll always be there You can always hit me Even if you weren’t mad at me Even if I wasn’t mad at you I’ll always be there You can always scream at me Even if you’re a stranger on the street And Im just passing by I’ll always be there You can always judge me Even if your no better yourself Even ifI did nothing worse than be myself I’ll always be there You can always take my money Even if you have plenty Even if I have little I’ll always be there I’ll always be here Looking out for you No matter what you did to me Or I did to you I’ll always be there |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
went a little heavy on the duality for my taste but not a bad one. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write,,, being there is a true friend... Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
not bad, sara. l like. it reminds me of what l wish l could say to a couple people in my life, if only l knew how... well done. laurie. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this. It spoke a lot of truth. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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