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Castled in Crescendo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Love is like the wind roping in the sunset tamed among the clouds riding on the heels kicking up a storm. Passing at a glance breaks against the wall what will be will surely be drifting closer to the shoreline turned down by the sea. Crashing over waves rocking in slow motion dancing freely dipping lowly castled in crescendo. ~*~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, beautiful! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
This is really special! I can just picture this person, looking out at this magnificent sunset, on a breezy early evening, right before twilight. Feeling the mist in her face. The wind, blowing her hair around... being stirred by the majesty of nature. Walking along a sea wall... scenting the musky smell of the ocean, and marveling at her gentle, yet persistent power, as she is subtly enticed to continuously crash and tumble onto the shoreline. Each time, letting out a gentle roar, and a magnificent spray of mist. Emulating the meeting of two, very able and passionate bodies. One steadfast, and secure, the other... fluid, and timeless... A remarkable poem BluesSerenade! Thanks for sharing it with us, Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (06-07-2003 05:55 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very pretty words~ and yes..."what will be will surely be"  hugss M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
i always open your posts with great anticipation...not once have i been disappointed. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Such talent! I'll never know how you do this. It is that special heart you have I'm sure. That or a wonderful vacation that has inspired you to new heights@  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely Lori...much enjoyed the read this morn. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - love is like the wind for sure, sometimes it's here, sometimes it goes, sometime it stays... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Why thank you Helen~ It's nice to see your name here. Dixie~ Richy~ What a lovely reply, I thank you most sincerely~ Thanks for always being here Maureen~ hugs you~ I appreciate you James Michael~ Thank ya! Edder~ My, that was awful nice of you to say so. Gosh, thank you very much. You are much too kind, and I am forever grateful to call you my friend. Warm hugs to you Larry~ Thank you Nancy for sharing your smile with me, hugs dear one~ BC~ That's right, love is fickle like the wind, there's no predicting when it will change direction and sweep us off our feet! Thanks Bill~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, you've done it again, dearest friend, your wonderful poetry always makes me feel homesick, wishing I could live right beside the ocean! (kiss on cheek) Now how the heck can I get there, hmmmmmmmmm, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
great poem...love IS like the wind, sometimes a loveley welcome breeze, and sometimes it just kicks dust up in your eyes. =) Good Stuff Joe |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful Blues and ..er if you didn't get it in one of my other replies. I apologize for the alley i tried to write but couldnt find yer email. peace? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this sings and soars,,,,,,,,, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Noah~ thank you for shining your light my way. Joe~ Dust in the wind can certainly blur my vision. Thanks for the nice reply~ Raph~ I think we were replying to each other at the same time. Hey, no need to apologize and no hard feelings what so ever. You weren't the only one getting testy...it takes two, I'm mean it's only fair to slice it down the middle, but you can have the bigger half. Peace brother~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks for the read girlie~ (I almost missed you there) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mann . . . I despise it when you are right . . . and here you are - moreso than I wish . . . beautiful writing Bluesy xxoo |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I very much enjoyed this one, it conjured up some powerful images. And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific write,,, enjoyed.... Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
loves intensity of ups and downs is it worth it,yeah |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very nicely said, Lori.....love can indeed be like the wind. It's only when it turns into a tornado or hurricane that the problems begin!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you for the flutter by tweets, I don't know how right I am, maybe more like a little flighty, but that hasn't stopped me yet! I'm always so happy to see you here EagleOne, thanks a bunch! QJ~ I'm glad you did, and thank you for the terrific. gyiel~ Well yeah, like the painted ponies go up and down. I appreciate you taking the time. Thanks. Wonders never cease! What a pleasant surprise this is!! Thank you for your wonderful reply Mr. Balladeer. I guess there really is a first for everything, and I'm speechless.  |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
There's a lot to this. Enjoyed it very much. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks, man~ |
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