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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-04-19 07:18 PM

What will happen
If you ever leave me
No, no
Won't let you go
Because we shared so much
And there Is more to share
In this world
You are my love
You are my world
That belongs
Into my heart
Only you
I belong
Only me
You belong
We will never let anyone hurt
You
Because you are my world and I care
for you
I care about you
Very deeply
Deeply In love with you
Only you
You made me smile
When I need someone
You always come to me
And you take my hand
You comfort me
Only you
Ilove
Not anyonelese
Only you
I care a lot
You showed me
so much
You thaught me everything
I wanted to learn
And you showed me everything
I wanted to share
Only you
You make me smile
Only you
can take my heart
away
Only you.....

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-04-19 08:35 PM

Your use of repetitive words makes this
feel like a soft, private song, Vandana...
it's lovely, and I thank you for sharing it
with all of us...

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-04-19 09:41 PM

Effervescent with genuine true love.
Lovely!
Love, Margherita

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-04-19 09:47 PM

Vandana,

There is a song, Only You, "Can make m dreams come true, only you....." though don't if that is the title but it is running through my mind right now...and probably will be the rest of the night...

You captured so well a true love that an ~only you~ can fulfill.

Like this a lot. Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-04-20 02:37 AM

Lovely writing...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-04-20 02:48 AM

just beautiful!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2003-04-21 10:50 PM

Lucky you and the person you write of.

Your heart speaks in this, and I hear you.

Nicely done vandana~

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2003-06-02 01:57 PM

enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-06-02 09:57 PM

(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and only you can bring joy and happiness to this persons heart so may you two forever find bless together, yay! (kiss on cheek) This would make a gorgeous love song, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

9 posted 2003-06-02 09:59 PM

Lovely piece, full of emotion

I enjoyed it very much

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2003-06-02 10:02 PM

Ah, you open your heart for all to see my friend, and beautiful it is...

jwesley

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2003-06-02 10:25 PM

This is quite lovely vandana, and a pleasure to read. Chris

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2003-06-02 10:38 PM

Very nice Vandana....lovely write.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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