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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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To Modify Shadows gray my fine of seem And dust of time opines my dream Subtle loss has worn my hear Shorn the high notes of my ear Distil of age has add to sage But sage has sad the face of gauge And I am in a twilight sea Arthritic in the wind that be I walk the rainbows fantasy And magnify each ecstasy And though I ride a phantom knight The goal is hopeless in my sight Change has changed my song of sing And tolls the bells with lower ring The raven chased the butterfly And I can only look and sigh And oh and ah the things that were The things that made my heart to stir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well the raven may have chased the butterfly..but the dragon chased the moth and he caught her   youre as young as your Randy dragon is dandy, and both of your are sweeter than me raspberry candy *L*    |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy I hope there are many things left for you to "oh and ah" about...don't let your sail luft.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Though still your mind brushes paint of blue there is no such thing as a sad sigh from you for dream's a landscape and you're the man who still paints poetry with so fine a hand... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, If Tinkerbell has said succumb Then Randy will surely come If that is really not the case Than I will sit and take his place. WWRS scorpio Thank you and I will seek the wind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You not only shine but are sweet too. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thanks. I am in agreement with the entire message, but especially: Change has changed my song of sing And tolls the bells with lower ring Melton |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - feeling abit melancholy to-day? We will just have to waltz those feelings away. Come with me and cue the band - Your thoughts be light, just take my hand. Awww, where is my sister with the tea? Toast with marmalade for thee. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Change has changed my song of sing And tolls the bells with lower ring The raven chased the butterfly And I can only look and sigh And oh and ah the things that were The things that made my heart to stir" Ah! Tis you dear Sy, who makes us 'oh' and 'ah' and 'sigh'!! Love this morning read..now tea? ~Morning hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
One day, one I reach your age, if I make it, I will hope that I have the energy and spryness that you have. You do amaze me (and I just can't imagine how anyone could have kept up with you when you were younger M |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...seems there are many lady poets here who's hearts you thrill, and that Randy is still a dandy! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The most consistent thing about life - It's subject to "modification"... or is that "change"?... Either way - You have a way of changing our Passionate mornings for the better, dear Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melton, Glad you liked that passage. Chris, Never fear your sis is here and we will tea together, :kiss; Nancy, hugs and :kiss; back. Maureen, You delight my ego, Martie, Ah that dandy randy don't fly as high as he used to. Ah Nan of my heart you were from the start. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 AWESOME! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you for the awesome, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You need not worry. The years have certainly not hurt your song. Joyce |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
stiff muscles and bone don't keep you off your poetry throne, and you never ever drone you seem to have found how to keep your mind quite flexible [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (06-02-2003 01:23 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good afternoon, Mr. T. ~ You simply must join me for some lemonade under the shade of an elegant elm tree. We can while away the hours laughing and talking and reciting poetry. We'll just enjoy the glorious present and revisit not the pains of the past or borrow troubles from the future! We'll just be and enjoy the camaraderie! Loving hugs, EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) NEVER...I mean NEVER....modify anything about you....you hear me...NEVER (smiles) We love you just the way you are and we couldn't ask for anything more, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Joyce, Thank you so much. Midnitesun A sweet reply, thank you. Earth Angel It would be my pleasure, Noah, Wonderful reply, thank you. |
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