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James
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since 2003-05-28
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0 posted 2003-06-06 04:53 PM


Sitting beneath the shade of a tree
there she sits quietly and gently
her brown hair blowing gently into the wind
her eyes staring out into the distance
she touches my heart gently with a soft touch
she is the one i love.

[This message has been edited by James (06-06-2003 04:57 PM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-06-06 04:54 PM



James, Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Krystopher Morris
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Ancient land called Chivalry
2 posted 2003-06-06 04:54 PM


Good job bro, I knew you could do it. Welcome to passions! Keep writing, Need any help, you know all you have to do it ask. Never give up on your new found ability, James!


"Death, so called, is a thing which makes men weep, and yet a third of life is passed in sleep." -Lord Byron

[This message has been edited by Krystopher Morris (06-06-2003 04:56 PM).]

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
3 posted 2003-06-06 04:58 PM


I see her there...daydreaming of your love.
Beautiful, James.


Patricia

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-06-06 05:20 PM


Very lovely first post!
Welcome to Passions!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2003-06-06 05:55 PM


Hello James

Welcome to Passions!  Your words spoke on love and were beautifully written.  I'll look forward to reading more.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-06-07 04:40 AM


beautiful! Welcome to Passions!

Looking forward to more of you!

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2003-06-07 06:09 AM


Nice...James
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Gaia
8 posted 2003-06-07 01:09 PM


HELLO! WELCOME to Pips Place!

(and say thanks to Krystopher)

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-06-07 04:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is a pretty debut, dearest friend, we have a big family of romantics here and you are our new dove to join the family, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet James, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

littlewing
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10 posted 2003-06-08 03:06 AM


Welcome to PIP James

what a sweet entrance . . .
xxoo

garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-06-08 03:10 AM


James, welcome to Passions In Poetry.
I enjoyed reading your poem and look forward to
reading more of your work.
    
Hugs  
Ethel

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