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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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I can smell it in the wind I can hear it in the trees 'Round the bend turn your head quick snap! ADAPT season change rearrange at ease pleased to be free from this actual contractual frozen state NATURAL CHILD escape once again to that place deep within sing-song ring true to you scheming mischieving PhD I call to all three in my sleep dreamstate completely release me [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-06-2003 04:45 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
pleased to be free from this actual contractual frozen state oh how, i await the day.......i may be putting my own spin on, but..... dreamstate, yes i get answers in dreams, losing them when the robins sing again nice to know you......... again  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This was excellent. I like the way you expressed the changes. I have read it several times...think I will go back for one more 'round.  Patricia |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hiya Tweets~ Felt the quick snap and the changing winds in this. Kind of like frost bite~ Wonderful expression, you!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I can smell it in the wind I can hear it in the trees 'Round the bend turn your head quick snap!" Love this...oh yes!!!!! And, I'm keeping it!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent littlewing!! A keeper!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This was, if nothing else...exciting... loved the way it flowed and "popped"... Kool! jwesley |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Another great write Sue, as always. Jason |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Methinks you are "adept". (I'm so proud.) smiles and winks... chant on littlewing! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - the lady with a smile writing her heart out... BC |
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Ishmael Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 51 |
Yes! Avery "kinetic" write. Enjoyed this Ish |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I loved it but...I was sitting here giggling at my first take on this... "I can smell it in the wind I can hear it in the trees 'Round the bend turn your head quick snap!  The Exorcist! Just kidding - it was very creative, whimsical in nature almost airy, and I thoroughly enjoyed it, but I had to tease you. You rock! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good, highly enjoyed! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, I am always a child when I sleep! (giggles in delight)  I believe dreams are so very special and they are so meaningful too, even when I can't explain why, I think they are just underestimated! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a treasure, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele: no - your own spin is often part of mine too and yes . . . that day would be nice Patricia - thank you - yea this one tended to get psychological - this write Bluesy - yes - a quick snap - indeed Nancy - thank you - keeping it! Thank you -you humble me Thanks Chris - means a lot to me jwelsey - very cool I like them to flow . . . thanks Jason - always love to see you here - thank you - you are too kind to me K - hehehe adept - chanting to myself - thank you - made me smile you did Ish - kinetic - I like that - I try Mysteria - lmaoooooooo SNAP! Oh I despise that movie . . . also much to kind to me indeed thank you Hey Dix? Thank you Noah - you nailed it - yep - that child within . . . Thanks guys xxoo |
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