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Open Poetry #26

Effect

majnu

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since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

0 posted 2003-06-06 10:03 PM

Effect

There is not aesthetic beauty in her voice,
The sweetness is natural, fundamental.
Thick and warm and sweet like honey,
It washes over me like a liquid blanket.
Does the nightingale strive for my tears,
Or is her song intrinsic - baring,
Sheering, and stripping her soul?
She does not mean to love,
It is merely an expression,
The outpouring of a glorious soul.

[This message has been edited by majnu (06-07-2003 01:44 AM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-06-06 10:05 PM

Beautiful...simply beautiful!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-06-06 10:12 PM

terricic write!!!!

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2003-06-06 10:20 PM

Talent pour from your pen in such a way that it caresses the heart of your reader...Beautiful...

Ishmael
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 51

4 posted 2003-06-06 11:23 PM

Nice write....love as an intrinsic thing.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-07 03:23 AM

well put!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-06-08 03:17 AM

maj - this is utterly beautiful
xxoo

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