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As We Reach Out
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As We Reach Out |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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As We Reach Out It was a long time ago and yet, it still seems like yesterday when met, in a forum for hope and dreams, where words were all constructed, seams to hold together lives falling apart, where others, included, their lives to restart after deaths due to loneliness, illness or sameness, secrets let out that were kept until drained, stress that brought us together, you and I, and the others pairing us off like sisters and brothers who shared such, in common lost touch with the real and so we are here, still, so many to feel, to believe, to receive that which we can't seem to find in our lives that we live, but in dream words we post and with each, thoughts, forgive-ness is always in titled, and responsive in touch, and so that is why we engage in the fantasies and the loving so much, so we meet as we did, you and I, in the rain, and no matter the whether, we weathered the same, as the droplets of friendship took us far beyond to the living, no past could assess what we found, common ground. The hidden of masks was exposed, all around us was warmth in the coolness of air touching each and the manner of drying the dampness, tears reach deep inside there is sameness, you are me, I am you, as we both seek contentment of a friendship's long due.  M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Little Mo darling heart, there is in your writing a deep and abiding echo that lingers in the soul of the reader, so few writers can and do write this well fewer do this as well as you do. It is a pleasure to read such well written expressive work. This is an utterly utterly utterly wonderful post. So incredibly well constructed the flow is excellent like a stream of crystal water it refreshes as it strokes the mind. You know when I read your work I’m constantly amazed at how wonderfully expressive it is, its not that I don’t know you are a superb writer it is simply that I am astounded that each and every one of your poems is so brilliantly written. YOU know I love this darling one it is utterly utterly utterly perfect. Don’t ever stop writing such treats please. Take care of you darling heart, remember how special you are   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
keep reaching... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you for this, Maureen.  Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Marsha, you are medicine for one's soul hugsss and glad to see you writing again. M Ron, our arms are very long *s Thanks... eventually we will show pics... but most didn't survive the grayness of the day. M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hi Ethel, you snuck in while I was responding. Thank you for your kind words. hugs M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
so that is why we engage in the fantasies and the loving so much, so we meet as we did, you and I, in the rain, and no matter the whether, we weathered the same, as the droplets of friendship took us far beyond to the living, no past could assess what we found, common ground ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Maureen~ It is this sort of poetry that first drew me to you. Your words flow effortlessly, from one heart to another. Now I need to go find a kleenex and compose myself all over again. Love ya Maur~ |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Now this is writing taking your trip with bad weather and all still binding the words and bondness of a friendship etched upon these pages for us to achive the closeness you 2 have now it is not a dream.  bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I remember those first poems of yours too, Lori...they drew me to you also. hugss and here have a kleenex on me... Bernie, a very nice response  and thank you for the card...I always appreciate your kindness. M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Maureen, just a beautifully touching write here...glad I didn't miss this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very expressive...James |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Maureen this was so beautifully touching , I remember first reading your poems about 6 years ago and you still express feelings so excellently Hope |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dixie, glad you caught my words, too. I have been blessed to meet so many of my poet friends from this forum and others in real. JamesM,hugs and thanks M Hope, has it really been that long ..wow..and here we are still at it. hugss Me |
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