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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-06-06 09:03 PM



Anger
prevents me from
wandering these bright halls
calling me to darkness, instead
this night.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Martie
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1 posted 2003-06-06 09:05 PM


Maureen...Always you say the feeling just like it is.  
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-06-06 09:05 PM


terrific!!!

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-06-06 09:24 PM


Awesome Maureen. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-06-06 09:31 PM


Not the most pleasant of nights!

~ May sleep come swiftly and sweet dreams fill your nights, Dear Maureen!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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displaced
5 posted 2003-06-07 03:32 AM


a powerful emotion
NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2003-06-07 04:34 PM


Seems you're having a bad night. May the Sleep Faery come and bring you calm and peace.

Hugs, Marti

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7 posted 2003-06-07 06:56 PM


Ooh, been there....and have been the cause of it! Well said, my friend.

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2003-06-08 05:29 PM


Isn't it amazing that I am letting my tree that is dieing  and the answers the powers that be are giving me, letting them get to me until I am seeing red.
Thank you Martie, Q, Chris,
Linda, Dixie, and Marti.
Yes, Ed, I dislike getting the run around and then having some I told you so's afterwards.

Thank you all for reading my small expression of heatedness.
M

  


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (06-08-2003 05:30 PM).]

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