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lisa17
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since 2003-06-06

Posts 1

0 posted 2003-06-06 09:24 AM

Tears flow
Down my bruised cheek
Blood soaked shirt slightly ripped
I wrestle my weak body up
from hell

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-06-06 09:25 AM

Lisa, Welcome to Passions. Not good at this? You certainly came in with a thought-wrencher, and heart-tugging poem. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-06-06 09:25 AM

powerful, painful first post...welcome

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-06-06 09:30 AM

Welcome to Passions...
Very powerful first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-06-06 12:43 PM

(big hugggssssssss) This is a very heartwrenching debut, dearest friend, I too have felt this sting and you are not alone as there are many who identify with the anguish you've felt and will compassionately lend you a shoulder, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Lisa, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lisa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2003-06-06 01:29 PM

I wouldn't be any too good at wrestling my body up from hell, either. And the tears and the blood make me very uneasy. This is a scary poem.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-06-07 02:38 PM

lisa:

for not being too good at this - I am in awe here . . .

Welcome to PIP!

you'll fit nicely
xxoo

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2003-06-07 02:43 PM

Welcome to Passions...you express yourself extremely well...I could easily invision one of the layers of hell I once visited....I look forward to more of your writing..

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-06-07 03:19 PM

Nice expression...James

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-06-07 04:56 PM

we all beg to differ.. welcome

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2003-06-08 11:51 AM

WELCOME!
emotional intensity in so few words
your self-assessment is incorrect, my friend
you are good at this

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