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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2003-06-02 08:24 PM



Forgetting you, why is it so hard? why is the pain still there?
Sometimes its just to much for me to bear.I tried so hard to push you from my mind.....nothing can erase you not even time.
Sometimes, I try to talk myself out of wanting you but I don't listen.
I love you more than anyone that's the honest truth.
Tell me what I have to do to have to forget you.

For Lana

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yv
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1 posted 2003-06-02 08:31 PM


Your truth is gorgeous.  The fact that the words are so close to my heart is irrelevant to the delivery of the feelings.  I hope to read more of your work.

New Member,
yv

ParisGrl
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2 posted 2003-06-02 08:34 PM


yv,

Thank you very much.....it was very painful for me to write.  I've never loved someone so much.  You will see more of me i promise.

~Laura~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-06-03 03:09 AM


I'm going through this right now...it hurts
ParisGrl
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4 posted 2003-06-05 01:44 PM


Passing,

I know that it does but I have learned that sometimes the only way to let go of the hurt is to move on.  I never thought i would say that.  lol  trust me you will meet someone else.

Peace,
Laura

Jamie
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5 posted 2003-06-05 09:59 PM


Forgetting you, why is it so hard? why is the pain still there?
Sometimes its just to much for me to bear.I tried so hard to push you from my mind.....nothing can erase you not even time.
Sometimes, I try to talk myself out of wanting you but I don't listen.
I love you more than anyone that's the honest truth.
Tell me what I have to do to have to forget you.

Sorry-- couldn't help but rearranging your words a bit-- the emotion in your poem made me do it  

Time hasn't erased your
memory from my heart
Wanting to forget you
hasn't lessened my ache
To deny my love for you
Is to disavow my very existence
The wanting pain reminds me
of the living proof.

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-06-06 05:45 AM


thank you Laura, just what I needed
ParisGrl
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7 posted 2003-06-07 07:47 PM


Jaime,

That is absolutely beautiful.....i loved it....thank you.

Passing,

you are very welcome my friend.

Take Care,
~Laura~

icebox
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8 posted 2003-06-08 11:21 AM


There is more than metaphor in the chemistry of love.  The soul craves emotional contact; the body craves physical contact.  

Time heals both.  The yearning never goes away completely.

Thank you for sharing this here.

HopeS
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9 posted 2003-06-08 11:39 AM


that is just how I feel , if we completely let go , do we ever truly heal ?
Hope

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