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victor
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0 posted 2003-06-06 09:07 AM



the sky is dark, cloudy
Why would you even consider going out?
Rejection happens to everyone
Pain is a religion
Does God ease your pain?
The sky breaks open
I can feel it in my heart
The world is insignificant
Why won't this go away?

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1 posted 2003-06-06 09:09 AM



Welcome to Passions, Victor!  I look forward to reading more of your works.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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2 posted 2003-06-06 09:14 AM



Welcome to Passion victor !!
Enjoyed your first post !!
Have fun here ~
Chris

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3 posted 2003-06-06 09:19 AM


it will go away, eventually...may be cliche to say, but time does heal all wounds.....
great first post, welcome

victor
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4 posted 2003-06-06 09:20 AM


thanks, i appreciate the compliments
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5 posted 2003-06-06 12:41 PM




(big hugggssssssss) So much is insignificant in the eyes of all our brothers and sisters, but believe me, each grain of sand on the ocean still is in tune with all of which that lives and you'd be amazed at what may come rushing in with the ebb! (sigh) This is a very heartfelt debut, sweet friend, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Victor, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victor, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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6 posted 2003-06-07 05:17 PM


Rejection happens to everyone

Isn't that the truth, precisely why I don't put much faith in it.  Nice write Victor, and welcome to passions.

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7 posted 2003-06-08 03:07 AM


Victor:

Welcome to PIP

a strong write and honest and quite sadly
it will not go away - it is life
yes I know . . .

nice entrance
xxoo

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8 posted 2003-06-08 03:45 AM


like this

welcome to Passions!

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9 posted 2003-06-08 11:53 AM


nope, I don't enjoy
rejection

but you have to find a way to go around it on the pathway through life

WELCOME to Passions!

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