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victor New Member
since 2003-06-06
Posts 2 |
the sky is dark, cloudy Why would you even consider going out? Rejection happens to everyone Pain is a religion Does God ease your pain? The sky breaks open I can feel it in my heart The world is insignificant Why won't this go away? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Victor! I look forward to reading more of your works. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passion victor !! Enjoyed your first post !! Have fun here ~ Chris  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it will go away, eventually...may be cliche to say, but time does heal all wounds..... great first post, welcome |
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victor New Member
since 2003-06-06
Posts 2 |
thanks, i appreciate the compliments |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) So much is insignificant in the eyes of all our brothers and sisters, but believe me, each grain of sand on the ocean still is in tune with all of which that lives and you'd be amazed at what may come rushing in with the ebb! (sigh) This is a very heartfelt debut, sweet friend, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Victor, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victor, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Rejection happens to everyone Isn't that the truth, precisely why I don't put much faith in it. Nice write Victor, and welcome to passions. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Victor: Welcome to PIP a strong write and honest and quite sadly it will not go away - it is life yes I know . . . nice entrance xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like this welcome to Passions! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nope, I don't enjoy rejection but you have to find a way to go around it on the pathway through life WELCOME to Passions! |
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