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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-06-06 08:57 AM




confetti
falling from above,

heaven dances
on the ocean floor,

beaming faced moon,

the kiss between
the sky and sea,
      
lover, won't you marry me?  

save me a dance,
set this shackled heart free,

finding you,
i can then find me,

beating heart on mine,

your life
speaks sanity
in this absurd
uncertain world,

i see you,
with my naked soul,

reveling in
this one truth -
that you exist

para ti......roberto....siempre.............gracias
(for you, Robert.......always)
Happy third anniversary !!!!!!!!!


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-08-2003 11:18 AM).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-06-06 09:00 AM


welcome back...

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-06-06 09:02 AM


muchas gracias, thank you, kindly
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-06-06 09:21 AM


Good morning, Michele.
Nice to read your words again.
hugs
M

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-06-06 10:49 AM


What a pleasant surprise! Missed you Michelle!

Love your poem and I'm so happy to see you posting again!

Luvs 'n hugs,
Linda

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5 posted 2003-06-06 11:43 AM


Hello Michelle  
It's really good to see you.  
Heart hugs  
Ethel

Martie
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6 posted 2003-06-06 11:59 AM


Michele...What a beautiful poem!  Good to see you again!
inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-06-06 12:04 PM


thanks for the welcome, and it's nice to be back.....
passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-06-06 01:14 PM



inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2003-06-06 01:16 PM


thanks, dixiechick.........
nice to be back

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2003-06-06 02:32 PM


inkedgoddess - nice to see you again...

BC

inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2003-06-06 02:35 PM


thanks bill, nice to see u too
littlewing
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12 posted 2003-06-07 04:20 PM


ahhh Michele - this is beautiful . . .

may your rainbow come after this rain . . .

(make sure he sees this please)

I have missed you here truly
xxoo

Selina
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13 posted 2003-06-07 04:28 PM


Very beautiful words, great poem, I liked it a lot.
Aenimal
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14 posted 2003-06-07 04:55 PM


Couldn't wait, so good to see you back Mish
inkedgoddess
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15 posted 2003-06-07 05:58 PM


thank you for the welcome
it is nice to be here,,,,,,
and to have been blessed with some of you
that stuck your neck out for little old me......truly.......

sue.......yes, he read, he knows, he comes and goes.......he's a rainbow
raffi........you are a crusader, what can i say?
the real deal

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16 posted 2003-06-07 07:00 PM


In this busy, busy forum, it's so easy to miss gems like this one....glad this one didn't slip through the net.

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passing shadows
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17 posted 2003-06-08 04:44 AM


making sure it doesn't get missed...
kayjay
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18 posted 2003-06-08 10:09 AM


He is a lucky man indeed to inspire such commitment.  I always enjoy your writing.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

inkedgoddess
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19 posted 2003-06-08 11:17 AM


thanks for the nice welcome
kay,
actually im the lucky one

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