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chinesestone
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since 2003-06-04
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0 posted 2003-06-06 04:38 AM



The sity of glim

Now,the hand which I embraced you
suit to express my loving
suit to write a poem
to go through many place
full of would,but no color
Just so
like an old photo lost its way  
weak,dark,exhausted
Decrepitude two decades
but there only one light left
Was placed on the desk
no one know how many years has gone
The dark night is usually like this
file in
the details are not pur
also not complicated
From all directions,around us
forever ,the love is kind
we will not leave that light
breath,hug,then beginning exists
then flurried, afresh watch each other

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nightblue
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since 2003-06-04
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1 posted 2003-06-06 09:38 AM


ti
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-06-06 10:35 AM


..."like an old photo lost its way
    weak, dark, exhausted"...

Wonderfully descriptive line so full of meaning.

Beautiful poem!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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