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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-05 01:34 PM



As If

I have felt cotton
threaded count
smooth as silk
in the sorcerer’s hand
sand spun to glass
yet, in my stretch
beyond all limits
I find that
cotton is still cotton
even when texture
feels like silk


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1 posted 2003-06-05 02:14 PM


but..there is nothing wrong with cotton..
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2 posted 2003-06-06 05:43 AM


yeah...sigh
Patricia
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3 posted 2003-06-06 08:34 AM


Enjoy the feel, my friend.  Cotton or silk, no matter.  Lovely write.  You got me thinking.


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4 posted 2003-06-06 09:24 AM


cotton, is better than silk any day of the week....at least, for me
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