Open Poetry #26 |
If I Could Paint You Healing |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I wish I could dip a paintbrush Into the palette of my mind, And paint a world around you Where only love you’d find. There behind a fence with roses, Is a garden to soften your despair. Above, a brightly colored rainbow Lifts heavy darkness in the air. I'd try to paint you peace of mind, Trying hard not to intervene. It might chase away the raindrops Turn your tears to days serene. I’d try to paint me standing On your doorstep, in the desert there. You could cry upon my shoulder Your troubles we could share. I’d try to paint ‘over’ with 'forever' And mend your broken dreams. I’d try to brighten up your darkness Until the warm sunlight beams. Yes, I’d use this caring paintbrush In the corner of my mind… To paint my wishes all around you And hope true love one day you’ll find. ~* A card for a friend who is hurting *~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (06-06-2003 12:41 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your Friend[s] are much appreciative for all you do for us...in so many ways, you are always there to remind us we are never, ever alone. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
i bet this fits a lot of people i know i am one it fits Beautiful A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sharon, the out-pouring of love through your sensitive and caring words, demonstrates the depth of your beautiful and loving soul. Your friend is fortunate to have you in her life. Loving hugs to you both and may her pain and sorrow be replaced with peace & joy... Linda |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon...A friendship extended like this is a treasure indeed. Your friend is lucky to have you. PS...I'm glad to be your friend, too! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Bless you dear Sharon for your tender heart.Love, Joyce |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon~ What can I say?...I'm typing this with tears in my eyes. Thank you SO MUCH, my friend. I appreciate you and your friendship more than you know. This is such a beautiful gift and I will treasure it always. Love and hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (06-05-2003 12:41 PM).] |
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DozenRoses4UV Junior Member
since 2003-06-03
Posts 16 |
What did I tell you Vicky....you have great friends here taking care of you. Mysteria, You are such a sweet person. This is very touching. Thank you for being the caring person you are. DozenRoses4UV |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully tenderly touching! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Dearest "Friend" you are not alone with an empty space in your heart right now, as a lot of us have shared in the same sorrow. Funny though, somehow that does not make the pain easier does it? I hope it does help to let those that care about you give you a hug, and the ability to listen when your feelings need validation, as that is what a real friend is. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (06-05-2003 05:52 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Sharon, Your friend is truly fortunate to have someone as warm and caring as you to be her friend. This is so full of compassion.. What a loving heart you have! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sharon, this is a loving gift for your friend and I'm sure it will help with healing. You are a very kind and generous lady. Hugs and Luvs, Marti |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
The quickest cure for a broken heart is a dear friend to sew the stitches...and you've certainly done that in a most loving way. You've changed your picture recently. It is very warming. Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
even the responses are very touching Sharon...a beautiful poem of friendship...just lovely *s M |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Although this is intended for one particular person who needed a hug, feel free to take one too if you need one. Thank you all so kindly for liking her card, and kayjay, thank you for the lovely compliment, but also you have not written since April, get to it now [This message has been edited by Mysteria (06-05-2003 08:41 PM).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I can't think of anyone more qualified to write this poem...because I know you mean every word |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a beautiful card this is. Your thoughtfulness and kindness shines through. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sharon, You did all of those things for me. And what a difference it made. Awesome write and hope it helps others as much as you have helped me. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yanno Michael you are darn special yourself, I can attest to that. Eloise - I am delighted you enjoyed this. Larry - and I would do it again anytime m'friend, and think of your courage, and faith every day and it gives me hope in many things. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (06-05-2003 10:53 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sharon, I truly felt reading this that this was a card for my dream girl I haven't yet met too! (wipes tears) As much as I want her so very much too and want to have true love, I also think always of how my dream girl must feel and how she has to wait ever so much and if she cries on her bed at some time every day and wondering how long it will be till she finds me running to her! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know this special person you dedicated this to will find a love so golden soon, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is such a beautiful gift Sharon and so very indicative of your giving spirit and I agree with all of those above who say to have you as a friend is truly a blessing to be treasured. Hugs you. ~D~ I must have had my momma's will |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mysteria - this has to be one of the most heartfelt soft tender writes I've read. You have written something beyond words can say. Excellence in its mastery... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I thank you all kindly for reading and hope you will extend your hand to someone who could use a little help in the healing process too |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I’d try to paint ‘over’ with 'forever' And mend your broken dreams. I’d try to brighten up your darkness Until the warm sunlight beams. Lots of hugs for you! The closer I came to the end of your poem, the tighter my chest felt. Absolutely breathtaking Mysteria~ Your writing is a wonder that fills the heart with the best kind of love there is. I hope your Birthday was extra special! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Awwww, thank you BluesSerenade, and yes my birthday was special as I was alive to enjoy it Rather uneventful but nonetheless a beautiful day around me. Thank you kindly for your lovely comment - even those are so poetic - you too are one with such a warm, and giving soul that is easily felt by those reading your work. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (06-10-2003 12:09 AM).] |
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