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Seduce Me With Your Smile
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Seduce Me With Your Smile |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Alan Ayers * * * Undress me with your eyes And seduce me with your smile Within your loving arms Is where I'd like to stay awhile Adorn my body with kisses As you lay me on the bed You won't need a "How To" guide For my mind is easily read Search for hidden treasure As you touch my inner soul To reach love's highest peak Will be our ultimate goal Sample love's sweet nectar From the chalice of desire As we ignite the coals of passion The flame of love burns higher Trace your finger over my body Across every curve and mound And as we move towards the summit The pinnacles of passion are found * * * "I only wish to be the fountain of love from which you drink, every drop promising eternal passion" I am in motion |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Woo-Hoo, Sue!!!! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous visions of poetry,,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sue, you write the most beautiful romantic poems. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful stuff Sue...You write this style so well. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always know how to do these so beautifully |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Geez Sue, this has to be one of your most sensual poems! Sultry and spicy, and everything, nicey! I’m gonna have to shut down my monitor for awhile, it’s overheating! lol Smoldering write Sue! Wonderfully done, Richy |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
q very good loving poem,i like it. now,i try to translate it into chinese. ÓÃÄãµÄÑÛ¾¦½«ÎÒ±©Â¶ ÓõÄ΢Ц½«ÎÒÓÕ»ó ÔÚÄãµÄ°®µÄ±ÛÍäÖ®ÖÐ ÈÃÎÒСí¬Æ¬¿Ì ÓÃÄãµÄÎÇ×°ÊÎÎÒµÄÉíÌå ¾ÍÏñÄã°ÑÎÒÇá·ÅÔÚ´²Í·Ò»Ñù ²»ÓÃ˵ÈçºÎ¿ªÊ¼ ÎÒµÄÐÄÇéÄã¿ÉÒÔÖªµÀ ÕÒÑ°ÄÇÒþ²ØµÄÕ䱦 ÏñÄã´¥ÃþÎÒÉî²ØµÄÁé»ê È¥µ½´ï°®ÇéµÄ·å¶¥ ½±ÊÇÎÒÃÇ¿ÊÍûµÄÖյ㠴ÓÏ£ÍûµÄ±ÖÐ Æ·³¢°®ÇéµÄÌðÃÛ ÏñÎÒÃǵãȼÆðµÄ»ðÒ»ÑùµÄ¼¤Çé °®ÇéµÄζÈÂýÂýÉÏÉý ÄãµÄÊÖÖ¸ÔÚÎÒÉíÌåÓÎ×ß ´©Ô½Ã¿Ò»¸ö°¼ÏÝÓë͹ÆðµÄ½ÇÂä µ±ÎÒÃÇÂýÂý¿¿½ü¶¥µã ¼¤ÇéµÄ¶¥µãÒѾµ½À´ |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
my friend i made this cards for you ,i hope you like it. best wishes. http://bj.qq.com.cn/u/s/shanshangshi/sue.htm |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Why do I get the feeling that my poems would make more sense if they were written in Chinese? Actually, in any foreign language, other then English... Hey, who knows, then they might even rhyme? Chinesestone, that was so cool of you to do. I've never really seen the Chinese language before. That is so interesting! I bet Sue will love it! |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
i think you are right  my friendchinese can give your poem another feeling,some had ever saied chinese is the most complicated language,it can show one's feeling or other things more eticulous£¬ in ancient times,chinese poem always rhyme, now we also have rhyme poem,but most poeople do not like it,i think,most people like modern poem. one chinese word only can express one meaning, both chinese and english have its advantage side. how do you think? and how about english poem? [This message has been edited by chinesestone (06-05-2003 04:34 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice..James |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, another wonderful poem from your pen. Thank goodness your creative muse did not dry up. I love the card nd translation done by chinesestone. Fascinating ... Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue! Softly sensual....lovely. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I nearly didn't post this as I thought it might be a bit too risque but I'm glad I did. Chinesestone - I was so very humbled by your words and for your thoughtfulness, thank you so much for the lovely presentation. Richy - I'm sorry for causing your monitor to overheat!!!lol Send me the bill in the mail. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
Sue i have send an email to you.: |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue: ok now I have been gone for a while and the whole place goes wild lol This is beautiful and passionate and where do you get these beautiful pictures from (I stole it lol) . . . I love this one - leaves the mind to wander . . . and love your new picture!!! Miss you xxoo |
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Selina Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 62Philadelphia, PA, USA |
Wow.. that was fantastic! I think I need a cigarette...  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!!Such a sensually perfect poem...I LOVE IT, Sue....More please... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooooohhhh...this is such a beautiful write filled with passion, sweet friend, this is a little bit warmer but still so gorgeous and wonderful to read, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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