Open Poetry #26 |
Innocence Of You |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“INNOCENCE OF YOU” Moonlight caresses a rose garden, petals are closed with nights sleep, as they remind me of the innocence of you… ~~~~ Bill Charles |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Ahhhh. One collective sigh in the romantic beauty of this verse. Patricia |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your eyes have captured pure sweetness. Wonderful, Bill. Love, Margherita |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Great night time gaden of beauty A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed the innocence and purity of this lovely poetic expression of love... Moonlight & Roses, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Bill..love this short and to the point write. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
~~Moonlight caresses a rose garden~~ what a vision. Oh you're a petal Bill, always full of such loveliness. much enjoyed as always. lots of love , gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lovely as always, Bill. hugs M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh, how very pretty Bill. Nice work. TD |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of your best Bill...James |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC, so few words, so much love and affection. You are a wonder dear man. Hugs and Smiles, Marti |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...Clever verse and, oh so, romantic besides. I love the Rose and its use in this poem. Somehow, a Rose speaks of the beauty and the innocence of love. ***Ivy Rose |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is beautiful. Hugs Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill: I do beleive this one is my favorite - you say it all in so few words - words that bear weight of this world lovely - as always xxoo |
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Selina Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 62Philadelphia, PA, USA |
Very beautiful, romantic words. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
With coming of morning sun the warmth from your tender love shows petals where dew has clung awaiting the kiss of love *sigh* such a wonderfully inspiring poem...Well done, Bill... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you have a heart that shines with innocence that is bound to forever make your loved one feel happy and special, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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