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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Contained I wove you into a memory fashioned from hollow reeds and time collecting yesterday |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
helen, Is that yesterday in a basket? And I thought this was an "I wove you" poem. (Sorry, I couldn't help myself.) You DO know I love ALL your writing, right?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This so reminds me of a conversation I had with "someone"-- I had to tell him I needed to find a safe place in my heart to keep him. I did. And so...we live happily ever after? You tell me, it's hard for me to tell sometimes.  Loved this, you. Hugs. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Paints a picture everyone can relate to...nicely done! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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