Open Poetry #26 |
Give Me Color |
juliek086 Junior Member
since 2003-05-31
Posts 13Arizona |
I want to use color to make me feel better and more like how I want to be I want my hands to move like they do in my dreams when I'm good at everything I want to make the sound of pure serenity that only represents what holds true to me I want to smile and know that you're falling for me I will never be enough for you, I'm never enough for me I will never be the one for you, I can't even be number three They are more important and mean so much to you, I want to be just like them and mean something too What would it take for you to see whatever it is that others see Maybe it is my fault for never showing you how I can be Somebody find me some color, give me dark blues and green Give me just one sleeping pill and I will paint with the hands from my dreams I will create what I feel and make it so the world can see And deep inside I will sing and make pure serenity The sound will carry to the one I make it for and be lost by those who hear another's truth It will drowned the inside of your ears and cause your feet to come up from beneath You will fall and fall hard just like you did to me Love is when you do things you swore you'd never do |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really liked it. Reminds me of my ex Greg Cold hands means a warm heart |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Very touching thoughts. Welcome to PIP. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Hey, that was lovely. An amazingly wonderlful write. Welcome aboard julie. I hope you enjoy the atmosphere here. And I also hope you enjoy the poetry for we are sure to enjoy yours every bit as much. Junior Member, yv |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice writing here! welcome to passions! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome! Nice entrance well written. |
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