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Open Poetry #26

Remembering

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-06-04 09:02 PM

just a moment
in time
brings many feelings
i shall yearn
true love
for it lies
within
ones
heart
forever

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

nightblue
New Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 4

1 posted 2003-06-04 09:40 PM

i like the feeling of this poem.

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

2 posted 2003-06-04 11:30 PM

Simple and elegant. Very nice.

Junior Member,
yv

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-06-04 11:31 PM

I really enjoyed this truthful poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2003-06-05 12:25 PM

Truer words have never been spoken.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2003-06-05 01:29 AM

Yeah it does get lodged in there never to be set free...nice wording

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-06-05 02:20 AM

yes it does

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

7 posted 2003-06-05 08:47 AM

Perfectly penned!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-06-05 08:50 AM

Reads like a Hallmark card...perfectly lovely.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-06-05 10:01 AM

liked this

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