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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-05 12:25 PM


A Certain Place

there is
a dividing line
between
heaven and hell
and I know
where it rest

right across
my heart



© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2003-06-05 12:31 PM


Aw helen,
You are a wise lady. You say so very much with such few words. Bless you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

ethome
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2 posted 2003-06-05 01:25 AM


I have to agree with Larry.....you've said so much with so few words.

The best teachers have the biggest ears

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-06-05 02:22 AM


yep! you said it!
Richy
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4 posted 2003-06-05 02:24 AM



I really like the way you put that Helen. It really is the place, where everything starts, and ends...

Your poems are becoming quite addicting!


Richy


chinesestone
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since 2003-06-04
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5 posted 2003-06-05 03:10 AM


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this short poen,contain many things,
thanks for  you share it with me.
hugs

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