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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-05-14 05:15 PM


I dream in numbers
A matrix like count of life
My life counts nothing

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-14 05:16 PM


short and very good thoughts

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2003-05-14 05:55 PM


But nothing matters
in the matrix, as in life,
except for our dreams.



Nan (Pilgrim variety)

[This message has been edited by Pilgrimage (05-14-2003 05:57 PM).]

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2003-05-14 06:03 PM


Vivid and powerful.
TD

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-05-14 06:10 PM


Jason, perhaps you were not adding correctly...

Warm hugs,
EA


littlewing
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5 posted 2003-05-15 12:47 PM


well it sure counts here . . .
add those numbers up again MR

this is amazing
(although I disagree with it lol)
xxoo

Midnitesun
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6 posted 2003-05-15 12:51 PM


numbers are manmade
they don't hold the truth for me
the matrix IS you

Nan
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7 posted 2003-05-15 07:27 AM


Vast numbers of dreams
Give rise to experience
Accomplishment's borne

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-05-16 05:57 PM


. . .  came back to see nothing which is
something . . .  

Brad Majors
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9 posted 2003-05-16 06:30 PM


a matrix haiku very cool
Margherita
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10 posted 2003-05-16 06:42 PM


hmmmm ..... dreams and numbers combined are fascinating.
The third line though .... must be the wrong result!
Your life counts much!
Love, Margherita

Gina Culliney
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11 posted 2003-05-17 03:24 PM


matrix, no rules, and it sounds as if nothing counts there?  look forward to seeing the first one.  Interesting, little senryu, indeed.
inkedgoddess
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12 posted 2003-06-06 12:38 PM


we are nothing , aren't we ,
thank god for that, sometimes

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