Open Poetry #26 |
I dream........senryu |
Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I dream in numbers A matrix like count of life My life counts nothing |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
short and very good thoughts It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
But nothing matters in the matrix, as in life, except for our dreams. Nan (Pilgrim variety) [This message has been edited by Pilgrimage (05-14-2003 05:57 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Vivid and powerful. TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Jason, perhaps you were not adding correctly... Warm hugs, EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
well it sure counts here . . . add those numbers up again MR this is amazing (although I disagree with it lol) xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
numbers are manmade they don't hold the truth for me the matrix IS you |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Vast numbers of dreams Give rise to experience Accomplishment's borne |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . came back to see nothing which is something . . . |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
a matrix haiku very cool |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
hmmmm ..... dreams and numbers combined are fascinating. The third line though .... must be the wrong result! Your life counts much! Love, Margherita |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
matrix, no rules, and it sounds as if nothing counts there? look forward to seeing the first one. Interesting, little senryu, indeed. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
we are nothing , aren't we , thank god for that, sometimes |
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