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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794


0 posted 2003-06-03 11:12 PM



I await
Of night’s cruel fate,
Fingers bleeding,
in pain pleading,
as mystic quest,
seeks out my breast,
blind, unseeing,
no mortal being,
alone I mourn,
in dark’s reborn,
‘mid earthly mire,
burns funeral pyre,
final stage
screams silent rage,
as I await,
ope’s midnight’s gate,
night’s ebon chasm,
in muted spasm,
honed axes thrust,
from dust to dust,
tread noiseless feet,
in life’s defeat,
comes death's call;
in final fall.

© Copyright 2003 Tim - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2003-06-04 04:00 AM


A very dark piece but cleverly put together.
chinesestone
Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76
China
2 posted 2003-06-04 04:03 AM


i like the feeling in the poem
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-06-04 04:11 AM


very dark, but understandable
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