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Open Poetry #26

Midnight Musings...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2003-06-03 11:12 PM

I await
Of night’s cruel fate,
Fingers bleeding,
in pain pleading,
as mystic quest,
seeks out my breast,
blind, unseeing,
no mortal being,
alone I mourn,
in dark’s reborn,
‘mid earthly mire,
burns funeral pyre,
final stage
screams silent rage,
as I await,
ope’s midnight’s gate,
night’s ebon chasm,
in muted spasm,
honed axes thrust,
from dust to dust,
tread noiseless feet,
in life’s defeat,
comes death's call;
in final fall.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2003-06-04 04:00 AM

A very dark piece but cleverly put together.

chinesestone
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 76
China

2 posted 2003-06-04 04:03 AM

i like the feeling in the poem

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-04 04:11 AM

very dark, but understandable

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